Audition thread- Jackpot

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:alert:This is an audition thread for Jackpot. :alert:

It is most likely that Titania (bka Black Widow of The Six) will be his opponent so only SHE and Jackpot are to post in this thread, unless i indicate otherwise, until i deliver my critique.
 
JACKPOT

Real Name: Axel Gresham
Occupation: CEO of Noah Corp
Place of Residence: Noah Corp HQ, Boston, MA

Age: 35
Height: 6’1”
Weight: 176 lbs.
Hair Color: Sandy blonde
Eye Color: Green

Character Image: Josh Holloway
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Personal Appearance: Axel Gresham is very laidback in his style of dress, often wearing jeans, sneakers, and a T-shirt, making him a more relatable presentation to a common audience. He wears glasses because obviously, he has poor vision otherwise. He has a full goatee and grows his hair somewhat long. Often he leaves something of from his laboratory on his person, most commonly latex gloves. But at his large parties and other festive gatherings, he often dresses top notch with stunning impression on his wealthy guests.

Personality: Axel is generally speaking a very laidback person, and is very carefree in most aspects of his life. He is an absolutely brilliant man, but most of this is put towards his devotion to genetics, more specifically gene splicing and if his thought remains on some unfinished experiment he can sometimes seem very distant. He is also a very personal and secretive person, especially about his own personal life and origins, and when that is tested his temper flares easily. Sometimes, he grows very instinctive, his thoughts lost on hunger, aggression, dominance, and lust. Generally he is confident in himself and his abilities, and loves to entertain, he loves to throw large, high powered parties. He is also commonly seen snapping and/or whistling. He keeps himself in above-average physical condition and is confident in his own fighting ability.

Another aspect of his personality is his paranoia, although he claims he has no paranoia but instead he is just being far more intelligent than anyone. His confidence protects him from constant fear of others killing him but he can still be quite defensive. But his paranoia is most evident in the length of time it takes for him to befriend people, not as business acquaintances, or on the level between host and guest, but as true friends.

History: Very little is known of Axel Gresham’s childhood and early past and he confides that information in no one known, although it is suspected he may have some confidants. What is known is that he was born and raised in Boston by James and Sarah Gresham. This is also where he excelled in public school. It is also known that he has always been especially fond of animals, despite rumors that he is malicious, cruel to animals, and experiments on them in twisted manners. Very few people know of his other abilities, mutant and trained that make him a formidable opponent. Beyond that, nothing is known about his life until he founded Noah Corp in his hometown of Boston after graduating with top marks from local Massachusetts Institute of Technology (MIT). He was an extremely talented genetic engineer who worked for both private corporations as well as the government, earning both the trust of these facilities as well as large sum payments. One of his greatest early accomplishments was to disprove the applicability of cloning in an excellent speech at MIT.

Noah Corp, founded on Gresham’s singular earnings as well as a series of government grants, devoted itself towards research into the process of gene splicing and its applicability to the human genome. He labored for a decade soon after college all the while struggling to keep his corporation afloat with little initial earnings. Eventually, he had perfected the process and had full knowledge of its workings. So he opened the corporation to the highest bidders on the world market to be the first to experience the phenomenon of gene splicing between the human and animal kingdoms, a union of the dangerous and powerful animal body and dangerous and powerful human mind, an achievement of man and man’s science, an affront to the divine. Unfortunately for the world, Gresham opened splicing to anyone for any purpose, no question’s asked, often holding large parties for guests contemplating the process. The government had already given Gresham full reigns on the project because his work would be such an advancement for science and he agreed to use only American wildlife, including threatened and endangered species for his massive gene pool. By the time they realized the mistake, Gresham had already amassed a small army worth of gene spliced Manimals and had high powered allies across the globe. But his only goals are to further his research and to profit at the same time for both his corporation and his personal wealth.

Powers:

1. Axel has a very unique mutant ability. When he snaps his fingers, he creates a link to his own pocket dimension where he stores a massive arsenal of all sorts of objects; research equipment, weapons of all natures, medical equipment, Mentos, and even some of his Manimals. Fearful opponents and entertained allies claim he can summon an army at the snap of his fingers. His ability also works in reverse by which he can send things in a close vicinity to his pocket dimension. But any object moved by his power must be contiguous, he cannot divide objects apart with his power.

2. Axel is his own best experimental result. He was not his first test subject, but upon verifying the fruit of his labor, he gave himself the initial genetic treatment, taking several months and much money, prior to the actual application of the animal genes. Now, he will use any genes he requires from his private and personal gene pool (located in his pocket dimension) on himself as the situation requires, and can apply them to his prepared genes at any time in under a minute. But, he is also the only known person to have a de-splicing agent to return to his human form. It is presumed he maintains some of the best qualities of America’s fauna at all times, and sometimes this leaves him prey to instinctive nature.

2. Axel is a brilliant genetic engineer and person in general.

3. Axel has dangerous and high-powered allies across the globe.

4. Axel is a well-practiced magician/party entertainer in his spare time, able to perform many common feats such as opening, escaping, or picking locks of all sorts, breathing fire, juggling, sword swallowing, etc.

5. Also in line with his researching, magic, and power, Axel has absolutely perfected his slight of hand, mastering things like cards, dice, and the shell game, but it also makes him a formidable opponent, armed or not.
 
Sasha
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Dayum! I'm so in love with Josh!
Boston, MA

Haleigh sits outside Noah Corp HQ on a bench, pretending to read a newspaper. Positively confirmed intel had led her here... Axel Gresham was quickly becoming one of the country's leading geneticist.... RIGHT up Mystech's alley.... and Haleigh was determined to get to him first.

Zach's voice breaks the silence of Haleigh's thoughts, his cadence sounding quietly in her earpiece. "What if he's already in Mystech's pocket?"

Haleigh watches the building as though she can see right through its walls. Her voice is firm and without conscience. "Then I'll kill him." She waited for Gresham to come out for his morning run. He liked to keep in shape, an observer mentioned.

Zach:"Right. Well... do you want me to wire you the file we have on him?"

"I've already seen it. Thanks anyway." She says, distracted. Zach bids goodbye and leaves her to concentrate, as Haleigh looks at her watch.
 
The sun was coming out over Boston and it was that time of day again, time for Axel to go out for a run. First he limbered up, stretching in his private room at Noah Corp after quickly tossing on some shorts and a t-shirt. Things had been interesting lately, a lot of people were drooling enviously at him, a lot of people were looking at his money with sinister eyes, and then looking at his results with all sorts of reactions; form fear, to reverance, to desire. The most obvious being MysTech, they had offered him money, but Axel had no intentions of selling his brainchild, his sweat and blood, but he knew the consequences that could hold for him, for his career, his corporation, and everyone around him. But it didn't matter, Axel HAD to take his morning run, it was what he had always done and he never claimed to be better than a creature of habit. A moment before he stepped out the front door of the large building he snapped his fingers and a pair of running shoes appeared in his hands which he quickly tied the laces and continued on his way.

One more crack of the necks, hand and wrists and he starts running down Boylston Street clearly whistling 'We Will Rock You', preparing to start by running around the Boston Commons and Public Gardens, always a beautiful way to start off his day, whatever would come next was up to chance, it was different every day, somedays Axel would spend hours outside, and it was a nice day...
 
Haleigh looked ove rthe top of her paper surreptitiously as Axel left his building and began his run. She looked around to make sure no one was watching before activating her MD chip. She disentigrated slowly, moving herself to a phone booth around the corner, the receiver in her hand, imitating a phone conversation as he passed her again. He disappeared into the Public Gardens, away from Haleigh's watchful eye.

"Lost visual... upload groundmaps for the Gardens."
>> Got him on satellite 23. He's rounding the second bend. Uploading grounds now, Director.

"Ah... now there's a place to intercept him." She said, tapping into the satellite herself and watching his progress. Under the cover of mostly deserted gardens, Haleigh disappears from the phone booth and reappears in the middle of the path, just around the corner. Gresham is headed her way.... and she makes sure they run into each other 'accidently'.
 
Axel runs through the Public Garden for a few minutes when all of a sudden he runs directly into a strikingly attractive woman, but peculiarly enough...he hadn't seen her just seconds before.

But he noticed that he had knocked what looked like a cell phone out of the woman's hand. He bended over, picking it up and handing it back to her. Nonetheless, his confidence was unwaivering and the fresh air was helping clear his thoughts just as he thought it might.

"I'm sorry, I must've gotten caught up in the Garden and missed you...", checks her hand for a ring, "...maybe its just that you fit in with this jawdroppingly beautiful place so well. But excuse me, where are my manners? My name is Axel...", suddenly the paranoia hits. Who is this woman that I should even let her know who I am, that is if she doesn't know already. Then again, I feel like taking a risk, its a beautiful place, beautiful weather, and a beautiful woman...maybe I've hit the jackpot.

A grin spreads across Axel's face, "...Gresham. Here's my card.", he snaps his right fingers and a card appears in them as he motions to hand that to her to.

"And what name befits a beautiful runner as yourself? Preparing for the Marathon perhaps?
 
"Oh-- excuse me..." She begins innocently, and then lets him talk. She accepts his compliment, his card, and her own cellphone with a gracious smile. She noticed that he looked for a ring before hitting on her. How observant... She noted mentally.

"Well.... I'm preparing for something, alright." She began, in a silky tone. "That's a neat trick you have there..." she continued, resisting the urge to make a handgun appear, sans snapping. Haleigh was never one to beat around the bush.... but she didnt want to scare the man... just yet. "Haleigh Davidoff. You haven't heard of me... but I know of you. You've made leaps and bounds in the genetics field. Something to be proud of, for sure... but also... a sound way to make enemies and rivals." She prods. She didn't seem to take into consideration that he might think her an enemy.
 
Axel is taken aback by the woman, something about the way she carried herself, maybe it was just the fresh air, he had been in the labs for quite some time. And again, his paranoia was kicking in, this time harder, like a stern kick in his proverbial mental balls. He decided it best to ere on the side of caution. He took a slight step back and reached into the back of his shirt as if to scratch his back, but in actuality he snapped making a lightweight, unnoticeable bulletproof vest appear tightly on his upper body, hidden by his loose fitting T-shirt. But maybe he was wrong, maybe she was genuinely interested in him, or at least just being polite. He decided to continue their friednly chit-chat.

"That?! Nothing but a cheap party trick, came with one of my suits I think. Anyway, its so good to see someone interested in my work without immediately jumping to buying it all from me or giving them a little doasge under the table. With all the scientists I accompany myself with, you'd think I'd know more people GENUINELY interested in the science of my work, but no, the charming Haleigh Lindeloff is the first since...my college professor."

Axel chuckled at the brutal honesty of what he had just said and then decided it was his turn to verbally prod. "Well, I like to keep my enemies away from me, and my friends seem to want to keep away from me themselves. But might I ask...which are you Haleigh? You want to run with me...unless your preparations are more urgent?"

Axel snapped once more and a water bottle appeared, he sprayed a little in his mouth, a little on his face, and tilted towards Haleigh in a friendly manner.
 
Haleigh's eyes narrowed.... she could smell kevlar a mile away... and this man had just suited himself with the bulletproof material. Haleigh took what might have been a wary move on his part as an admission of guilt... and THEN... he speaks again... dooming himself by getting her name wrong.

He's trying to MOCK me now? We'll SEE about that.

He tilted the water bottle towards her, but her hands dropped slightly, as if holding something... and then it appeared... a pump action shotgun... and Haleigh's expression went immediately grim.

"How's this for a cheap party trick, Gresham?" She taunted, as she pulled the trigger. The rounds weren't armor piercing, but they DID blast Axel back several yards, knocking him off his feet.

"The Name's DAVIDOFF... and you would do well to remember that." She said, as she waltzed over to him. She stood over him, looking down, a smirk on her face. "I had hoped to be allies, Gresham... but then you brought the bulletproof vest into the picture. How can I trust someone preparing to fight me??"
 
Axel began to think to himself for a split second...

Damn it! How did I confuse her name with a writer for LOST? And I've always been so good with names, something about her must have thrown me off.

Haleigh fired her gun sending him reeling backwards, and standing over him.

Maybe because she's a crazy...

"BITCH!" he yelled up at her before snapping both his fingers while on the ground.

One hand he swung with his reknowned speed and slight of hands, stabbing a newly appeared steak knife into Haleigh's shin. With the other he injected himself with a needle, the label reading 'American Alligator'. Immediately he started to transform, his skin grew tough and scaly, his teeth grew to dangerous looking points and his jaw followed in length, but his vision slightly decreased, balanced out by the various genetic enhancements he had never reduced.

Hoping the knife would keep her at bay for a moment, he shuffled backwards a few steps, prepared to fight off Haleigh Davidoff and her shotgun as best he could. His only reason seeming to be the fact she had just fired her shotgun at him, otherwise he could have just walked away coolly, but he would not be receptive to her unabashed assault, it was entirely insultive to him, and he had a growing suspicion that this was what Haleigh had been preparing for in the first place.

I'll identify her origins when she's dead or submits...somebody's sicked this woman on me, and they're going to sure as Hell wish they didn't.
 
"Oh honey... you haven't even SEEN bitch yet!"

Haleigh taunted, as Axel snapped his fingers. There was a flash of metal as he lunged forward to stab her, but Haleigh was far from taken by surprise.... she had seen his file... she knew that the snap of his fingers either brought something or took something away, and with machine speed, she CAUGHT the knife by the blade mere centimeters from her skin.

"Punk! Did you really think I would let you get away with that?" She asked, and as he stuck himself with a needle, she whipped him across the face with the butt of her gun to get him to release the knife. she holds the knife up, smiling as he takes a few steps back, she throws the knife BACK at Axel, and gets a good look at what he's become.

"Hmm.... more parlor tricks? I know ALL about you, Handsome... and I'm telling you RIGHT now... its gonna take more than a kitchen utensil to fend me off." She pumps the shotgun once, and then pauses... and after a beat, it disappears. "Okay... so that wasn't very fair of me. You know... we're not so different, you and I. SO.... one genetically altered being to another... come on... show me a few more of your tricks... and I'll show you a handful of mine."

She says playfully, as she gestures for him to make the next move.
 
The butt of the gun hits across the side of Axel's face, which he rubs to help calm the pain as he backs away. Then he couldn't help but smile, so many times he had heard of the adrenaline and success in combat provided by the gene splicing from his successes, his Manimals, now would be his opportunity, and he had a whole lot more combat potential than his human guinea pigs. First he snapped his fingers and the knife disappeared from whence it came.

Axel then snapped his fingers simultaneously and his shirt and the bulletproof vest disappeared, revealing a green tinted, scaled exterior. "First, an even playing field...". Axel laughed as he snapped his right fingers again, to make Haleigh's shirt disappear.

Then, another simultaneous snapping of his fingers and a fire torch and a jug of feul appeared, one in each hand. "Here's a trick, for the pretty girl in the front row.", Axel winked at Haleigh, with just a hint of malice.

Axel guzzled the feul, holding it in his mouth with a proper layer of spittle, then placed the torch in front of his mouth. He skillfully blew two fireballs, and then a large ring of fire around them at Haleigh. The flames were long and strong thanks to Axel's somewhat elongated and alligator like jaw. If Haleigh doesn't move, the fireballs will hit her, if she moves to avoid those, she may very well have to go through the ring of fire. Either way she would get burned, but Axel still wasn't shooting for kill. And he maintained his distance as well, unsure of Haleigh's capabilities.
 
Haleigh gave a most venomous look as her top disappeared. And yet... underneath the hooded sweatshirt she wore as a disguise, Haleigh was all business. Her trademark form fitting leather battle ensemble was concealed beneath her 'cover', giving even MORE of the impression that she had come prepared for a fight. Though she was still wearing the track pants portion of her disguise, they were low cut and her leather suit's belt could be seen... the red hourglass engraved on the buckle was in stark contrast to its black surrounding.

Haleigh manuevers to avoid the impact of both fireballs, but seems to think nothing of the RING of fire headed for her. She walks straight through it, and as she does, it mysteriously extinguishes. Her pants catch fire and fall off, revealing the bottom half of her suit, but otherwise she seems little effected by the inferno.

"I've been playing with fire for YEARS now... it WAS a nice trick though..."

Haleigh approached Axel as if she were a lion stalking down an impala... She blew the torch out as if it were a CANDLE... and then, three feet away from him, she lunged, shooting straight for the hip, and taking him clean off his feet to the ground. Straddling him, she placed the palm of her hand under his chin and pushed his head back, pinning it to the ground with superior strength.

"Now... like an alligator.... if I hold you on your back.... will you go to sleep? What about the reptilian tendency to sleep when the temperature drops?"

She pondered aloud, and as she asked her second question, She began to lower HIS internal body temperature. At first, her fingers would feel quite cold... and then, as seconds past... HE would feel cold, right down to his core.

"This is a trick I learned a LONG time ago... before I was infected with the TO virus."

OOC: If you want a look at Haleigh's powers, they're all listed at the bottom of her bio in "The Cast" thread in this same forum. :nod:
 
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Axel was altogether surprised by the woman; her looks (especially in her battle ensemble), her confidence, her wit, and especially her powers, more so her physical strength as he struggled to get loose, but accomplished nothing. But Axel still had a show to perform for his new number one fan.

The fuel in his mouth was gone and he had dropped the torch and fuel canister as he went down. So he decided on a different plan of action. At the moment, Haleigh was straddling atop him, holding his head down with one arm and one of his arms with the other, leaving his left hand free. As the cold did in fact make him drowsy, but he was still at least aware, helped along by some of his undiffused traits of enhanced senses and other things unbeknownst to most, more than likely including his current opponent.

But Axel was locked in where he was, and he decided he would prefer at least both hands free in the immediate sense. He snapped his left fingers and the pavement he was pressed up against disappeared so long as it was contiguous (stopping at cracks within it), the two dropped only a couple inches but it was enough to loosen her grip on his right arm. He simultaneously snapped his fingers, and suddenly two of his Manimals appeared. One a man mountain goat, the other a man mountain lion. The man-goat head butted Haleigh, knocking her off of him and circled around her while the man-lion defended Axel as he got up. He was living up to his reputation, he could indeed summon a small army in a matter of a minute.

But he had to deal with his own vulnerability with the spare moment. Three snaps and a triumvirate of syringes appeared; two in the right, one in the left. First he injected the left one, that destabilized him, eliminating the traits he had gained from the American Alligator. Then he injected the other two into his system, he was always fearful of using too many genes at once because, though successful, in all such experiments he conducted, the results of more genes resulted in more permanent changes, difficult gene therapy, or increasingly animalistic behavior.

The two syringes could be read as they dropped to the ground and Axel slightly convulsed with his genetic overhaul while the man-lion and man-goat continued their attack-and-defend routine, one was ‘Carpenter Ant[/]’, the other ‘Orangutan’ presumably from his personal collection he had to amass from illegally imported foreign specimens. The Carpenter Ant genes were dominant at first, his skin darkened and hardened forming a tough exoskeleton exterior and his strength was surely increased exponentially, meanwhile the orangutan genes maintained the integrity of his humanoid form, especially his skeletal and muscle tissue underneath the exoskeleton, again enhancing his physical strength, as well as his facial configuration, though his hair did redden.

“I believe you misinformed me, or at least left me in the dark, I now know you amassed a collection of very private data on myself for yourself, but now I should be better suited against you and you must know that I am more than a box of cheap tricks. But I warn you, I can summon an army in but a moment, these two are the first wave, and they are nowhere near the worst. Now I think a compromise could be worked out here…what is it exactly that you want from me?! I can think of a few things I might want from you...”

He knew the last part would grind Haleigh's gears based on what he had seen of her personality as of yet, but at the same time his intentions were sincere, he sought not to kill and he believed she must've come for some reason, as of yet he knew not of any enemies but MysTech, but for some reason he had her doubts that this woman was in the employ of MysTech, she carried herself out in a far too natural, uninhibited way.
 
Haleigh was so focused on Axel that the goat, for ONCE, took her completely unaware. She was hit in the forehead with such force that she was knocked completely from her position. She sat up, rubbing her forehead and blinking her eyes as the goat circled menacingly. The mountain lion lunged for Haleigh to fend her off of Axel, but Haleigh was ready this time, and she grabbed it by the throat and tossed it, with little difficulty, almost 50 feet away into some bushes. Haleigh took a step towards Axel and the man goat charged again. Haleigh grabbed it by the horns, and with a quick jerk, its neck gave a sickening snapping sound and went limp. Haleigh dropped it to the ground, and turned to meet the returning man lion with a Walther P22. She fired the handgun twice, the bullets hitting it square between the eyes. In midstride it faltered, crumbling under itself and sliding to a dead stop. Haleigh turned to Axel with a vengeant laugh.

"Better suited? You poor, disillusioned man. You couldn't find a way to defeat me with BOTH hands and a map. Compromise? You should have THOUGHT of that BEFORE you insulted me. Right now you'll be lucky if you can beg convincingly enough to keep me from KILLING you! SUMMON your ARMY.... and I will LAY WASTE to them as I SMASH YOU TO A PULP!"

Haleigh stands her ground, and raises her hand.... a few seconds pass... before the roar of jet engines is heard... There is soon no question that Haleigh has upped the ante... because above Axel's head, a couple hundred feet above the earth, a MASSIVE boeing 747 is in a NOSE DIVE, and moving at speeds in EXCESS of the speed of sound. The paint scheme on the plane has the bold letters "UPS" on the side, prompting a taunting rib from haleigh:

"What can Brown do for you??"
 
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Axel was again surprised with Haleigh, this time at her relentless brutality. She snapped the neck of the man-goat and threw the man-lion, though he landed on his feet he returned only to be plugged by a Walther P22. Now she taunted him…

“I don’t need maps, I am by life cartographer of the uncharted. Alas, I believe my only offense was entirely accidental, and I would think someone as intelligent as you represent yourself to be would be able to shrug off my mistaking your surname for that of a popular writer, but maybe you aren‘t fond of words of reason…a bitch as I deduced. Nonetheless, I can only defend myself here, and I suppose I will spare my Manimals…for now…and do what I can alone…well, with godless science as my only companion.”

Axel’s eyes dart upwards as winds blow hard at them on the ground and jet engines blare in his ears, but with a snap of the fingers the jet plane disappears, another snap and they appear above Haleigh’s head. Heedless of the success of that assault, he decides to taunt her.

“You have no idea the potential of my power…”, he starts his taunting, speaking the words almost like song.

“Oh Haleigh Davidoff…

I can take the very breath from your throat…
”
He snaps and Haleigh loses a quick gasp of air.

“I can unveil you for what you truly are and gloat…”
He snaps a few times and she is stripped, he snaps a few more times and restores her ensemble.

“ I could very well bring you the moon or sun…
Ending the world now wouldn’t that be fun?

I could make the ground underneath your feet disappear.
Or I could send you to my own dimension my dear…

And if there is one thing I’ve ever tried…
I am the best virus healer you’ve ever eyed.

Oh HALEIGH DAVIDOFF!
”

With the last pair of lyrics he, with a concerted effort, separates the techno organic virus from Haleigh, sending it to his pocket dimension where it is immediately absorbed into one of his Manimals. No one could have expected that Axel Gresham, CEO of Noah Corp, was a viable vaccine of the TO virus, as a contiguous element, he could remove it from a captive body. Now more confident in his ability to win once more, he limbers up a bit as he did before he set out on his run, clenching his fists with enhanced strength, still prepared for a surprising ability or attack by Haleigh, but hoping behind his jackass exterior that she would submit, or at least compromise.
 
Haleigh eyes Axel.... her plane disappears from over him and appears over her... Haleigh doesn't even look UP at it, and it EXPLODES, with all the shrapnel headed straight for Axel. The deafening noise drowns out the rest of Axel's speech, but Haleigh still feels the breath leave her throat and subsequently, the TO virus LEAVE her body. She drops to her knees, suddenly feeling weakened and tired... and SHOCKED. this was something even she couldn't have anticipated.... and though stripped of MOST of her powers along with her TO virus... she isnt showing signs of relenting.

He possesses the ANTIVIRUS?! HE MUST WORK FOR MYSTECH! I'll KILL HIM!!!!

She lifts her hand again, pointing to Axel, using a power she hasn't in a while.

"I can steal the breath from YOUR lungs as well... and replace it.... with WATER!"

She says, as she fills his lungs with BOILING HOT water, that instantly scalds his insides, giving him THIRD degree burns inside his lungs and throat as well as DROWNING him from the inside out, even AS the burning plane parts descend on him like a bomb from hell.
 
The shrapnel, fire, and smoke fill the area around Axel. Luckily, his new exoskeleton prevents him from the shrapnel doing much harm. But his hair catches on fire.

But as the smoke surrounds him, he suddenly feels fiery inside, and not of rage, his insides are singed and burned by boiling water. But he is a very quick thinker, in a moment he snaps in another syringe and immediately injects the ‘Blue Whale’ genes into himself. His body changes as he nearly passes out from suffocation and pain, a gel appears on the exterior and his bone structure is altered, becoming thinker but shorter, making him more stocky in appearance, his mouth becomes baleen and his respiratory becomes semi-aquatic in nature. He can feel the instinctive drives pushing in on his thoughts, but he could not risk the removal of one of the gene augmentations for fear of death.

As the smoke begins to clear, Axel walks out, a look of mixed confidence and desperation in his eyes. Suddenly, water erupts from a hole near the bottom back of his head, near his neck, shooting upward and extinguishing the fire that had already singed much of Axel’s hair. And in another moment, the smoke is replaced by steam as the boiling hot water meets with the air.

In a voice gardled by the baleen he uttered the following.

“You can call me Jackpot, hit me and you’ll get more than you bargained for, and I believe you’ve done more offense to me than a simple hit.”

Axel had no alternative, she was a relentless fighter, she had significant powers from all sorts of sources, and despite his weak attempts at returning to a compromise of some sort, he was left with no choice, another attack from Haleigh and he could very well be dead. He had to send her to his pocket dimension, she would meet a few dozen Manimals there, at least, but more than likely she would utterly eradicate them all. And, to Axel’s knowledge, there was no exit from his pocket dimension save for the snap of his fingers, so it was the most foolproof choice in his arsenal. Once he sent her there, he could never let her out nor go there himself, as a matter of fact it would ruin a lot for him. He could never let her out or escape there for contemplation again, she would kill him. He would no longer have an army at the snap of the fingers, instead he would have a prison for his ever growing number of threatening enemies. Or maybe, a quick reboot was in line, spring cleaning perhaps…

Still garbled, “I’m sorry it couldn’t work out between us…really.”, a sad look crept across his usually festive face, animal genes or not.

Snap.
Haleigh was teleported to Axel’s pocket dimension.

Another snap.
The North Star, the only star Axel could locate on a sunny day by education only, was teleported to Axel’s pocket dimension…it would incinerate all he had there.

Axel almost found himself hoping she would escape, and he could only imagine what forces he had now invoked the wrath of. He had an awkward fondness of what had turned out to be his as of yet most deadly foe, and all he could do was send her to her death. Even if she did escape, he knew himself to be a fool to think she would ever, EVER forgive him. And if she were powerful enough to escape, he had just ended his own life in her place. He would wait a moment before returning to humanity and most likely, continuing his relaxing job back to Noah Corp to reflect.
 
Critique

and THAT'S A WRAP!
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Allright, let me begin by thanking Jackpot for his interest in The Six and taking the time to participate in an audition. It is nice to know that our little rpg has captured attention of others outside of the cast.

Now, to begin, Jackpot, you did a very good job of following Lexi's lead. being able to pick up on cues from the mastrix and post accordingly is a MUST for those who play this game. I do not micro manage and tell people "when/where/how" to post. that's stupid and it takes away the creative feel of a game....but in order for the game to FLOW, the players must take the directionand cues from their mastrix.

The character certainly has a nice backstory, one that would easily allow him to figure into The Six but there were some things i wasnt exactly thrilled about.

Your character, while creative and interesting lacked the hardline focus and definition that is required to stand alone even among the core cast of The Six. He seemed too eager to "escape" the battle and Your character's bread and butter was a "snap of the fingers" and use of the pocket dimension. When you did manifest mutations (such as the alligator form) you didnt really UTILIZE them except to find ways to escape attacks that were delivered based on your responses. the whole idea of a character whose power is rooted in the manipulation of his own mutation is great but the added bit of a pocket dimension and a power that amounts to conjuration/evacuation of ANYTHING it wasnt used very well here.

It seemed like you were struggling with the amount of creative freedom you were given in this audition. That CANT happen in the game, you need to find a way to get into the groove and stick with it.

Toward the END you became more creative at least when it came to upping the anty but i wasnt exactly thrilled that your ever parry to Black Widow's thrust was to simply negate/nullify her attacks or remove them.

We have a character in this game that posesses the power to "Teleblink" objects and even SHE does not overly rely on it.

If selected to fill a spot in the game, The actual usage of the "snapping" / "pocket dimension" power would have to be further discussed before you were to use that in the game. displacing a STAR into your pocket dimension was something i had a hard time with. Our most powerfull teleporter, who ALSO has the benefit of her own "pocket dimension" has never attempted such a feat so casually.

in the end, the character demonstrated the ability to interact well, but in battle the pendulum swung from one extreme to the other with mediocre results.
 
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