Audition thread- Rampage

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my cue

(and THAT would be my cue eh Spell? :D )


:: Guardian herself rounds the corner to the dark alley where most of this confrontation has taken place.::

::wearing her sleek, form fitting, one shoulder body suit with accessories including goves and high heeled boots, the Seer looks ever so cutting edge but exudes a cold aura of contempt.::

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:: noticing the surroundings and seeing "herself" taunting the stranger who calls himself Xavier, Guardian smirks::

"I" couldnt have said it BETTER myself.

::smirking at Alexis in her glamored form, Guardian stood a few paces back and folded her arms::

What seem's to be the trouble here...."Alison"?
 
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"A momentary setback."

Toolkit's moved on his command alone by his powers and quickly tossed out three spheres, which proceeded to drain the energy back from who ever the hell this was and from the surrounding grid. Next one extra robot returned, but this time it was torn from the very metal of that surrounded them.

"Toolkit, Castle."

The next sound was of the extra Toolkit armor detonating its fusion generators as the real TOOLKIT teleported randomly away from the blast. Anything within the blast radius will be subjected to the heat comparable to the sun itself.

"The only thing worse than someone who is powerful is someone who THINKS they are all-powerful. Very annoying. Toolkit analyze debris and find both lifeforms."
 
:: Guardian stood fast, her arms still folded, as she was now standing beside Alexis and both women were encompassed by a pentagram of protection. Guardian had blinked herself next to Alexis and errected a field of protection to shield them from the oncoming blast. She moved with the speed of thought.::

Good thing i came when i did, Alexis. I "saw" everything happening from Illustra but i was confident you could handle yourself. This Xavier character heralds from the same place that Miracle did. and if he's not carefull...he will WIND UP where Miracle is NOW.


:: as the localized holocaust played out, the two women remained safely within Guardian's pentagram of protection...::

We are not impressed, TIN MAN. LEAVE THIS PLACE ...or DIE!
 
"That is not the first threat I have heard today. I hope you have more than just threats to throw. and for the last time, I saved Miracle from you. I am certain I can save myself. maybe I shoud redecorate this Illustra building that you speak of. maybe that will get you attention."

In the distance, the pair can hear the sound of an entire building collapsing in on itself like a house of cards.
 
Not today, tin can!


:: Guardian thrusts her hands out ala Piper Halliwell. a strange WARPING sound is heard as Guardian warps the temporal field around Illustra and REWINDS TIME...restoring the buidling back to its former order as the building turns BACK with time.::


BEGONE!


:: Guardan waves her hand out, gesturing ala Prue Halliwell as a rushing chiming sound is heard. she TK's Xavier and SLAMS him down into the ground with the force of a pile driver.::

Shockwave, draw on the power of THIS CITY! we are going to teach this man the error of his ways.
 
"Psychokinetic force used on this unit. Dampening measures accessed and protocols enabled. Temporal displacement in use recently. Tachyon field protections enabled. "

Toolkit got up and faced the two young women.

"Now it appears that I have to play rough."

He smiled as both women fell immediately to the ground writhing in unimaginably painful death throes.

"For the record, the last thing I expect you to hear is that I just had your hemoglobin eat its parent red blood cell. Enjoy death."
 
:: Guardian looked upon Xavier with such contempt as she discerns certain things about him::

His tech rivals that of MysTech's. I wouldnt be surprised if he was in league with them somehow. It wouldnt be the FIRST time it has happened.


UGH!!!


:: Guardian felt a SHARP pain...as she gritted her teeth and grimaced. wrapping her hands around her flat stomach she shuts her eyes briefly as she regulates her breathing....her body trembles from the terrible pain it feels as though something is taking her over..and forcing her body to turn upon itself::



::speaking with a strained, but no less determined tone::



NO! .........You don't scare me Xavier...... Maybe ......where YOU come from, being a suped up C3P-O is something to shout about, but here.... ::gritting teeth:: ......WE EAT people like you for breakfast. I can CONTROL MY OWN BODY and SLOW DOWN any degeneration process.

:: she leans to the side..against a wall, with one arm still wrapped around her flat, toned stomach....as she shakes a bit, her own temporal field adjusting to SLOW her body's internal process down to prevent whatever's happening from completely ravaging her::




Your disadvantage is that your only REAL power is over metal...nothing more, nothing less. Your ARMOUR and all there in provides you with "special effects"...nothing more than the technological equipment of a TALISMAN...Miracle had one of those as well, but i took it AWAY from him like THIS!

:: summoning her will to perserver, Guardian looks up and extending her hand::

AMOUR

:: being able "see" through ALL illusions [as she is a seer] Guardian LOCKS onto the real Xavier and his armour is surrounded by swirling, glowing orbs of dark magick as Guardian TELEBLINKS his armour and its tech OFF of his body and removes it from his person, waving her hand HURLING it away.::

now then, would you like to continue this conversation? and dont bother trying anything, becausei will KNOW IT before you do it.
 
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(Geeze, I step away for half an hour and ya'll are going crazy LOL)

:: Smiling as Alison appeared, Alexis turned to Toolkit, standing in the same fashion that Alison was. It was somewhat eerie how precisely Alexis resembled Alison. But as soon as Alison had appeared, Toolkit decided to make another move; this time against Illustra itself. Watching as Alison handled that situation, it was soon after that he unleashed yet another attack, this time against both woman. Grabbing her stomach in pain, Alexis cried out in agony, dropping to one knee. Closing her eyes in pain, Alexis gasped inward trying to make the pain subside. ::

"Dammit!"

:: Grumbling to herself, Alexis heard Alison call for Toolkit's armor, which immediately got her attention. Looking upward as the armor was teleblinked off his body, Alexis took this opportunity to give him a little taste of what exactly it felt like to be fried alive. ::

:: Pushing herself forward, Alexis dove INTO Toolkit, using her energy form. Staying within his body, Alexis began to electrocute him from the INSIDE OUT. ::
 
"Whatever you grab, I can grab back. That armor and any metal OR tech is mine, including your red blood cells. AAARGH!!"

Xavier sank to one knee as he is being hit by high voltage. his nanites get into gear, repairing any damage and keeping him barely conscious.

Suddenly the woman that that focused so much on Xavier were struck by the armor independent of his specific command with photon lasers in the back. Regaining the spilit second it needed, the armor teleported Xavier back in and locked temporally onto his form to preclude further separation. Alexis was siezed by the energy matrices oof the armore and dumped back out of its master.
 
:: Rolling onto the dirt, Alexis growled out as she glared up at Toolkit through brunette locks. Brushing her hair away, Alexis pushed herself to her feet, grabbing a hand full of dirt and clenching it tightly into her fist. Throwing her hand forward, the dirt flew straight at Toolkit's face and eyes, instantly turning into shards of glass. Quickly dropping to the ground, Alexis picked up the drain pipe that she had been hit with earlier, and glamoured it into a two by four, now slamming it fiercely into the side of Toolkit's knee. ::

"Bitch!"
 
well...that takes care of THAT.......I....


:: sensing that the armour was now acting independantly of the body, Alison turned around to see laser blasts coming her way...::

::she BLINKS out of the path of the laser coming for HER, sorry that she couldnt reach Alexis at the same time. But she does not BLINK back in just yet....::


:: as Shockwave distracts him Guardian FINALLY BLINKS in suddenly RIGHT IN FRONT of Xavier.::


Hi there.

:: There's the odd sound of "action" stopping, as Guardian thrusts her hands forward and SUSPENDS his temporal field, subjecting him and everything about him to TEMPORAL STASIS while TRUE FREEZING him in a thick, SOLID block of ice. leaving him frozen both in time AND the immediate space he occupies. Standing there for a moment, as they now have a surprising bit of silence, Guardian soffs::

resourcefull wretch, isnt he?

::looking back at Alexis::

Did he hurt you?
 
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"Well he got a little pipe happy on me earlier; but i'm okay."

:: Sighing out, Alexis looked down realizing she was still glamoured to look like Alison. Letting out a small laugh, Alexis' body engulfed in white lights before she reappeared looking like her self once again. ::

"Of course I get into a fight with a mutant who is immune to my powers...Always my damn luck."

:: Rolling her eyes, Alexis shifted her eyes back to Toolkit who was still frozen. ::

"I should shatter his ass....fucking lunatic."
 
Suddenly the armor is gone. Completely. Without a trace. As they look at the hole that once contained Xavier Daniels and his TOOLKIT armor, they hear a voice.

"As my teammate still lives, I will depart with this one lesson: When you fuck with one Avenger, you fuck with them all!!! I will leave you to this world, especially since my computer 'sources' inform me that you are what passes for the heroic element there. But should you ever harm a friend of mine EVER again, I will make sure that you do not live to learn the lesson. Hard fought, ladies!!!"

In a flash Xavier Daniels and his TOOLKIT armor are gone to their home dimension...
 
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AND THATS A WRAP! :admin:



Starting off:

THANK YOU, Rampage, for taking the time to participate in your requested audition.

It's nice to see that we have a renewed interest in this little rpg.

Your interaction skills are fantastic. I can see that you would have a character that could mesh will with the main and supporting cast of the six. able to adapt, and attentive to detail.

the FIGHTING is what bothered me. that ARMOR was almost a battle macro. It became confusing for ME to even understand what was happening at some points.

Granted the basic match up of an energy manipulator/projector against someone whose mean weapon an absorb and redirect energy was going to be a challenge for shockwave...she was FAR from out matched but i felt that the armor became an escape for EVERYTHING she tried to do and yet she was nothing more then a walking target for him. I didnt like that Shockwave's GLAMOR tactic was simply IGNORED. It was a definate move on her part and should have been acknowledged.

I sent Guardian in to shake things up, but in the end, i suspect that rampage may have felt PRESSURED to up the ante. The fact of the matter is, with that amor, there was not much Shockwave could do to him, despite her power. Black Widow would have been a much better candidate to fight him based on his heavy use of the armor but it wasnt supposed to be about "who can stop his armor". That armor protected against telekinetic attacks, teleblinking, temporal stasis, true freeze and an energy project of immense power...thats AN AWFULL LOT and it (the armor) overshadowed XAVIER THE CHARACTER.

IN The Six, we want characters who stand on their own. Some do have talismans and weapons but those items are NOT their bread and butter in battle.

In the end, Rampage, you did VERY WELL in the "socializing"/"interatcion" and i believe you have your hand on the pulse of the six in that regard. you could mesh well with the current cast members...but you would need to create a NEW character for this...Toolkit is NOT WELCOMED in the Six's reality LOL

thats all for this round ;)
 
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