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Well that is the end of that.
First thank you ,DDD, for your continued interest in The Six and taking the time to audition again. Your character was much more thought out this time round, far easier to be interested in. You took elements of the Six's backstory and created a character that would have MEANING for the others in the game and would make for some interesting drama should be cast.
For the interaction, you played up the personality traits of this character very well. Inquisitive, a sort of gentility, and even a bit of misplaced self righteousness.
His powers are as interesting as they are varied and nothing about that was "cheap". You didnt use any ONE aspect TOO MUCH to try to pull of some ridiculous over the top move against your foe, nor did it show that you were trying too hard to "not be overwhelmed by the Six". Be carefull that you dont get too rooted in any ONE aspect of your power, because that will make your character boring and annoying.
In your case, considering your last audition, i think the MAIN thing is that you didnt come in "trying too hard". you put thought into the character and played him with confidence. THAT is the sort of thing that will allow a person to mesh well with the existing cast. I believe youll be able to pick up on cues and follow along , know when to take the lead but when also to step back.
Overall, a tremendous improvement. well done.
Well that is the end of that.
First thank you ,DDD, for your continued interest in The Six and taking the time to audition again. Your character was much more thought out this time round, far easier to be interested in. You took elements of the Six's backstory and created a character that would have MEANING for the others in the game and would make for some interesting drama should be cast.
For the interaction, you played up the personality traits of this character very well. Inquisitive, a sort of gentility, and even a bit of misplaced self righteousness.
His powers are as interesting as they are varied and nothing about that was "cheap". You didnt use any ONE aspect TOO MUCH to try to pull of some ridiculous over the top move against your foe, nor did it show that you were trying too hard to "not be overwhelmed by the Six". Be carefull that you dont get too rooted in any ONE aspect of your power, because that will make your character boring and annoying.
In your case, considering your last audition, i think the MAIN thing is that you didnt come in "trying too hard". you put thought into the character and played him with confidence. THAT is the sort of thing that will allow a person to mesh well with the existing cast. I believe youll be able to pick up on cues and follow along , know when to take the lead but when also to step back.
Overall, a tremendous improvement. well done.