Demolition at Bella Donna: FULL COMBAT TRAINING

OOC: Opps... right... Well... A piont: I got you away... *lol* Just joking... Should I edit or?

BIC:
 
STOP

Okay people................battle over. those of you who showed up have done a good job..........but there were MANY individuals who DIDNT SHOW up and that had a tremendous negative impact on this session.

i am VERY unhappy about this. critique to come later tonight
 
Critique

okay people.......here is the review. This training session couldve been SO MUCH MORE FUN and REWARDING for everyone involved........but NO Shows.....and non consistent participation foiled that possiblity.

witchblade1987
jinxed
and
Elektra

all did not show up and caused a major negative impact on the session. Elektra is the ONLY one who was excused from the session. While i took the time to summon members with email or pmed reminders......i STILL didnt get the full participation required.

i would like remind EVERYONE that it is YOUR RESPONSIBILITY to check the "Training Cavern" often to see what sessions have been called and if YOU have been summoned. I do not have to send the email or pm reminders........i have chosen to do so as of late just because of the fact that we have a lot of new members arriving. BUT soon, there are going to be some drastic penalties introduced against those who continue to No-Show.


Enchantrah-- what happened girl? did you get bored with the lack of action in the session? this was your opportunity to WRECK alessandra's restaurant while you battled with a foe.....it wouldve made for an excellent session and i was sure youd bring the flava ;) though your appearence was far too brief. You continued to maintain that surly, bitchy personal that Melody is known for. I was sure that the battle between you and Epiphany would turn into a glorified catfight lol. You did well...but your participation was just too brief for my liking.

Epiphany-- a strong effort on your part.........despite your limited options.......you gave a good effort....fighting enchantrah and then Phoebe. Youve become more fluent in the use of your moe AND species powers. i also liked the choice of spells you selected from the Darkhold. good work over all and thank you for your effort DESPITE the rather lack luster turn out.


Phoebe-- youve branched out more with your character, shes more fun to watch and less "stiff". your becoming more proficent and selective in your use of the Darkhold. Your physical skills need to continue to be refined........id like to see more focused physical attacks with defined moves rather than jus the obvious and general responses youve posted. ALSO, always remember to treat every battle you are in seriously....do not slack up for one moment or rest on your laurels.......that could be the moment of weakness that gives your foe the chance to topple you


NEXT TIME people......go for the gusto...make more of an effort! i wanted to see Bella Donna TRASHED as you guys battled it out....but hardly anything was damaged..i wanted to see tables smashed, dishes hurled, food flung and all that LOL.

Epiphany and Phoebe will receive 1000 gil. Enchantrah will receive 950.

Witchblade1987 and Jinxed will LOOSE 500 gil ...as BOTH of you were summoned, there was a coven wide announcment made in the announcment thread and i pmed or emailed BOTH of you. NO EXCUSES. two more no shows WITHOUT a courtesy PM will result in a demotion.
 
Okey! Thank you so much DC! And thanks for the 1000 gils!

Good work to everyone that was here!
 
Yeah I was EXTREMELY bored with the lack of activity and it was more of a bother of going back and forthe with one person or the other, and the setting... I will be back lol! One Day!
 
- Melody is relieved that the battle at Bella Donna is over. She could feel the STD's trying to approach her. I guess a good washing get rid of the stench of skank. Melody thought of her memories with the so called Supreme Siren as her blood began to boil. That women was never a Siren, or at least she didn't act like it. All Melody ever heard was "Oh Alessandra, your such a good Siren". It was a good thing that Supreme Queen never went up against Melody for that would have been her last move. Melody's body temperature was heating up as her lighter red hair turned it's natural blood red. Her eyes seemed to be made of fire as the walls of the nasty low class whore haven began to melt before bursting into fire. Melody hovered over the ground as lava began to flood the floor, she looked over and quickly levitated the others. -

"Sorry, but this has to be done. The name Alessandra will NEVER be SPOKEN again!"

- Objects in the room began to randomly combust as Melody opened her mouth, not emitting her once beautiful song but a loud high pitch note that rippled waves of vibrating energy as it tore through the restaurant, crushing the walls as tables imploded and loud explosions were made. This was it! Melody closed her mouth as she teleported in an inferno of flames along with the others outside of the Restaraunt as the ground began to rumble intensly -

"Hold on to your knickers! It's time for the grand finale!"

- Melody seemed quite possessed as if another worldy force was controlling her completely. From underneath Bella Donna a huge volcano of great activity rose from the ground, spewing lava as the decimated, burned and finished restaurant plunged deep within the volcano. An explosion was exerted from the fiery pit as a rain of lava fell from the sky, Melody used her telekinetic powers to hold the lava at bay as she reverted back to her normal self, her hair brightening up and her eyes turning back to their chocolatey brown as she turned to Darkchilde, the volcano began to go back within the earth as a desolate lot held the remains of what used to be. -

"Good enough for you, Sweets?"

- She laughed loudly with the Dire Wraith. -
 
<< DC's blonde, double highlighted hair began to blow back and flow during the fury of activity caused by the catty siren, but as she watched the destruction of Bella Donna....a scene seemingly inspired by the movie "Carrie", DC smirked with wicked delight>>

oh i think this was DEFINATELY a worthy demolition of a cesspool such as this.

rest in hell, Alessandra..........along with your dead rotting cousin!

:firedevil


<< DC high fived the wicked siren and laughed with her as she admired her handy work>>
 
I'm so sorry i didn't come.. well, there's nothing I can do now.. I'm so sorry...
 
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